Haiku

Sew Buttons she said
I can taste her Memory.
Gypsy with my Heart.      2B
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4 thoughts on “Haiku

  1. This does not qualify as a haiku. You need to read good material to develop good taste only then can you create good work. Read the works of good writers and poets. Many people are not aware as to what a haiku really is. Simply putting in 5-7-5 unrhymed does not make it a haiku. 5-7-5 in fact is the least important rule. Gets your facts straight before you end up churning poem after poem in the wrong direction. This is not the best comment I know, but should you gather what I am trying to say, you will be thankful.

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